How important is it to be a good parent? As parents we all have different ideas of what success means for our children. To be a parent is a big responsibility. It is finding a real passion for something in life.
I believe everybody have different definition to be a respectful, proud and loving parent.
Children need our full attention even when we think they don’t make any interest. Sometimes they might have difficulty to express their feelings. It is hard to be relate to them if parents don’t do things together with them.
Parents should be actively and physically involved with children, teach and introduce them to a wide variety of activities and then give them the freedom to pick and choose as they grew up. It challenge plenty of energy and enthusiasm but becoming a parent is a gift, even though it means a huge responsibility. If the child feels the love and return that kind of love, the responsibility becomes less challenging.
To sum it up all, important qualities for a good parent are love, responsibility, enthusiasm and support and time for their children.
How important is it to be a good parent? As parents we all have different ideas of what success means for our children. To be a parent is a big responsibility. It is finding a real passion for something in life.
I believe everybody haS A different definition to be a respectful, proud and loving parent.
Children need our full attention even when we think they don’t SHOW? any interest. Sometimes they might have difficulty IN expressING their feelings. It is hard to relate to them if parents don’t do things together with them.
Parents should be actively and physically involved with children, teach and introduce them to a wide variety of activities and then give them the freedom to pick and choose as they grOw up. It IS A challenge FULL of energy and enthusiasm but becoming a parent is a gift, even though it means a huge responsibility. If the child feels the love and returnS that kind of love, the responsibility becomes less challenging.
To sum it up all, important qualities for a good parent are love, responsibility, enthusiasm and support and time for their children.
It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language? Give reasons and examples to support your response?
It is very difficult to learn any new language. If a person wants to learn then he or she will have to pass from very difficult ways. I think there are many difficulties of learning a new language. A person who wants to learn a new language should not shy and be confident. A person who has these two qualities can learn otherwise not. Most of the time a new language learner, speaks in a wrong way and people may laugh at him. If a new language learner can find out good friends who have command on that then it can be easy to learn. Good friend will never laugh at a new language learner. Hence, learning of a new language becomes very easy.
A new language learner should have a good teacher. If teacher is available then it is going to be easy. Teacher always gives the right direction. For instance, if an English learner has a teacher, then teacher tells him or her grammar rules and other aspects to speak and write in a correct way. Teacher also gets the confidence. For a new language learner it is most important thing.
If a person, who wants to learn English but does not have the atmosphere of English speaking then a person cannot speak. A person who doesn’t have the atmosphere from their childhood cannot speak the new language. For example English is banned in many countries. Therefore, the citizens who live there cannot speak English. When they come to United States of America they all find atmosphere and speak good English.
The most important difficulty to learn a new language is to find out good books and classes. With the help of books and classes people can do practice of writing and spoken English. For example, if I want to find success in TOEFL than first of all I have to find out good English books and classes.
At the end I would like to say if a person who doesn’t have all these difficulties then can be a master in a new learning language.
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It is very difficult to learn any new language. If a person wants to learn then he or she will have to pass THROUGH very difficult ways. I think there are many difficulties IN learning a new language. A person who wants to learn a new language should not BE shy BUT be confident. A person who has these two qualities can learn otherwise not. Most of the time a new language learner, speaks in AN INCORRECT way and people may laugh at him. If a new language learner can find out good friends who have A command OF that LANGUAGE, then it can be easy to learn. Good friendS will never laugh at a new language learner. Hence, learning a new language becomes very easy.
A new language learner should have a good teacher. If A teacher is available then it is going to be easy. A Teacher always gives the right direction. For instance, if an English learner has a teacher, then THE teacher tells him or her grammar rules and other aspects to speak and write in a correct way. A Teacher also DEVELOPS the LEARNER’S confidence. For a new language learner it is THE most important thing.
If a person, who wants to learn English but does not LIVE IN AN English speaking ENVIRONMENT, then a person cannot speak. A person who doesn’t have thIS ENVIRONMENT from their childhood cannot speak the new language. For example English is banned in many countries. Therefore, the citizens who live there cannot speak English. When they come to THE United States of America they all find THE ENVIRONMENT and speak good English.
The WORST PROBLEM IN learnING a new language is to find good books and classes. With the help of books and classes people can practice WRITTEN and spoken English. For example, if I want to find success in TOEFL than first of all I have to find good English books and classes.
FINALLY I would like to say if a person who doesn’t have all these difficulties then THEY can be IN CONTROL OF learning A NEW language.
You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewellery you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support you’re answer?
If I have received a gift of money I would prefer to buy a piece of jewellery not tickets to a concert. There are many reasons to buy a piece of jewellery. The most important reason is feelings. If I buy a piece of jewellery then it will always be with me even though person will not with me. Whenever, I will wear jewellery piece, I will always remember that person. For instance, on my marriage, my aunty gave me the gift of money then I went and gave the preference to purchase a piece of jewellery. Now, when I wear and see that piece of jewellery I always remember my aunty. A piece of jewellery always makes the good feeling and give the strength to relations but the tickets to a concert give a short term feelings and no relations.
The piece of jewellery is a good investment. When I find a choice to invest money then I always prefer to purchase jewellery. Therefore, most of the time on my birthday when my parents asked what gift you wants I always preferred jewellery. I love jewellery very much.
I prefer jewellery as a gift because it is a constant memory. Sometimes we forget our friends and relatives but with the help of a piece of jewellery we can again remember them and start relationships. If a person who gave me the gift and died after sometime but with a piece of jewellery person has still their memory constant memory in my heart.
I prefer to purchase jewellery because I like new fashionable jewellery. Few days before my husband gave me money as a festival gift. I used that money to bought small new designed fashionable jewellery. I bought it because of its unforgettable memory and it’s a good investment.
Finally, I would like to say because of these reasons; I will prefer to buy a piece of jewellery than concert tickets.
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If I have received/RECEIVEDa gift of money I would prefer to buy a piece of jewellery not tickets to a concert. There are many reasons to buy a piece of jewellery. The most important reason is feelings. If I buy a piece of jewellery then it will always be with me even though THE person will not with me. Whenever, I WEAR A PIECE OF JEWELLERY, I will always remember that person. For instance, on my marriage, my aunty gave me the gift of money then I went and gave the preference to purchase a piece of jewellery. Now, when I wear and see that piece of jewellery I always remember my aunty. A piece of jewellery always CREATES A good feeling and giveS strength to relations but the tickets to a concert giveS short term feelings and no relations.
A piece of jewellery is a good investment. When I find a choice to invest money then I always prefer to purchase jewellery. Therefore, most of the time on my birthday when my parents asked what gift I WANTED, I always preferred jewellery. I love jewellery very much.
I prefer jewellery as a gift because it is a constant memory. Sometimes we forget our friends and relatives but with the help of a piece of jewellery we can again remember them and start relationships. If a person who gave me the gift died after sometime ????but with a piece of jewellery THAT person has still their memory constant memory in my heart.
I prefer to purchase jewellery because I like new fashionable jewellery.A Few days AGO my husband gave me money as a festival gift. I used that money to BUY small new designed fashionable jewellery. I bought it because of its unforgettable memory and it’s a good investment.
Finally, I would like to say because of these reasons; I prefer to buy a piece of jewellery than concert tickets.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the best teachers.
In my view, parents are the best teachers. I agree with this statement. Home is the first and most important school where parents are the teachers and children are the students. If parents want good children they should become first the best teacher.
Parents should first become the ideal for their children. Usually, parents want respect from their children and for others as well. For this first of all parents should model good behavior with elders and youngsters. For instance, in a joint family if parents’ behavior is good with grandparents then children also behave in a good manner.
All parents want good and intelligent children. Children can be intelligent if parents give attention to their children from childhood. Parents want their children to get first position on all exams, and for this they should devote time to their children. Parents should teach their children to have the habit of study from childhood. If parents keep studying good books, their children will also want to study all these good books. For knowledge, the habit of studying good books is very important. For children, watching television is not good. First of all if parents do not watch T.V. then their children probably will also not watch T.V. Parents should always have the habit to watch those channels which give some knowledge like Discovery and the news channels.
Parents should always give good teaching to their children. The reason behind this is that children all are the growing citizens of the country. For a good country children should be good and parents should also be good teachers. Children can develop in a good, knowledgeable and well mannered way if their parents are literate. If their parents are not literate, they cannot guide their children.
For a good, intelligent, well mannered and decent child first of all for this parents are the best teachers. The reason behind this is that teaching starts from the home. If the base is strong then good fruit will develop.
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n my view, parents are the best teachers. I agree with this statement. Home is the first and most important school where parents are the teachers and children are the students. If parents want good children they should become first the best teacher.
Parents should first become the ideal for their children. Usually, parents want respect from their children and for others as well. For this first of all parents should model good behavior with elders and youngsters. For instance, in a joint family if parents’ behavior is good with grandparents then children also behave in a good manner.
All parents want good and intelligent children. Children can be intelligent if parents PAY attention to their children from childhood. Parents want their children to BE firs IN all exams, and for this they should devote time to their children. Parents should teach their children to have the habit of studyING from childhood. If parents keep studying good books, their children will also want to study all these good books. For knowledge, the habit of studying good books is very important. For children, watching television is not good. First of all if parents do not watch T.V. then their children probably will also not watch T.V. Parents should always BE IN the habit OF watchING those channels which give some knowledge like Discovery and the news channels.
Parents should always give good teaching to their children. The reason behind this is that children all are the growing citizens of the country. For a good country children should be good and parents should also be good teachers. Children can develop in a good, knowledgeable and well mannered way if their parents are literate. If their parents are not literate, they cannot guide their children.
For a good, intelligent, well mannered and decent child first of all for this parents are the best teachers. The reason behind this is that teaching starts IN the home. If the base is strong then good fruit will develop.
Some people say that learning from experience is better than learning from books. Do you agree? Compare and contrast learning from experience with learning from books. Use examples in your answer.
I agree with this that learning from experience is better than learning from books. There are many reasons. For instance, people read many books on married life, watch many movies and come across many families but with all aspects people can get only an idea. But actual experiences start after getting married. People understand life after marriage. All these learnings cannot come from books. Books are also important for learning. We cannot deny the books. Without books we cannot get confidence to do any thing. For confidence books are very important.
Many people like to visit places outside their home town. This habit sometimes comes by the reading books. In books pictures attract people to visit places. But actually it is very difficult to visit outside places. Sometimes people face difficult situations. With books people cannot manage tough situations. All these learnings come from experiences. People feel great after managing all these situations. If people want to get education then they should read books for success. With experience only people cannot become educated. But with the help of experience people can decide which book is good or bad.
Now the world is based on computers. If people want to learn computer skills then they can start with books. For computer skills learning, books only give an idea. If people really want to learn it then they will have to use the computer. Otherwise all things are imaginary.
The most important example of learning from experience is to learn a new language. We cannot learn a new language only from books. Books only give an idea of usage. Once people start speaking and writing then they learn from experience of making mistakes. This is impossible only from books.
Whether people learn from books or experiences, learning period is always a difficult period.
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I agree with this that learning from experience is better than learning from books. There are many reasons. For instance, people read many books on married life, watch many movies and come across many families but with all THESE aspects people can get only an idea. But actual experiences start after getting married. People understand life after marriage. All thIS learning cannot come from books. Books are also important for learning. We cannot deny the IMPORTANCE OF books. Without books we cannot get confidence to do any thing. For confidence books are very important.
Many people like to visit places outside their home town. This habit sometimes comes FROM reading books. In books pictures attract people to visit places. But actually it is very difficult to visit outside places. Sometimes people face difficult situations. With books people cannot manage tough situations. All these learnings come from experiences. People feel great after managing all these situations. If people want to get education then they should read books for success. With experience only people cannot become educated. But with the help of experience people can decide which book is good or bad.
Now the world is based on computers. If people want to learn computer skills then they can start with books. For computer skills learning, books only give an idea. If people really want to learn ABOUT COMPUTERS then they will have to use the computer. Otherwise I IS JUST THEORY.
The most important example of learning from experience is to learn a new language. We cannot learn a new language only from books. Books only give an idea of usage. Once people start speaking and writing then they learn from experience of making mistakes. This is impossible only from books.
Whether people learn from books or experiences, THE learning period is always a difficult period.
What are some important qualities of a good school teacher? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.In my opinion,school teachers perform a major part for every student in each of their lives. They will shape each and every student in studies when viewed on academic side. And it is the duty of every teacher to lead students in a good path in life. So,in my view a good teacher should fulfill the following qualities.
1.kind,and affectionate
2.care and attention to every student
3.should advise students to lead a safe and good path
4.should be smart enough to handle each and every student’s performance in academic activity
5.should encourage students to take part in extra curricular activities apart from studies
6.should be more than a parent in school
7.should come down to the level of student to handle him/her to understand the student perfectly
8.Should know how to handle the student softly without beating or imposing severe punishments
The above points highlights the qualities of a good teacher.but nowadays teachers are not taking proper care for the students and they are not even fulfilling one of the above qualities in some schools. As a result students are leading a very dangerous paths sometimes.
To illustrate the above points,I experienced dealing with teachers who had both negative and positive qualities,teacher with merely positive qualities and teacher with merely negative qualities
I studied in south India and my school days went on well till my fifth grade class. Till that time,my studies were going smoothly and I met one excellent teacher with extensively good qualities(the qualities I mentioned above) and she used to advise students in every step of their life, even when they get a fail mark in exams. As a result,many of the student’s performance drastically changed and resulted in a very good performance on the consequent exam sections. This impressed me a lot and I used to clarify my doubts with that teacher always. After I changed my school because of my father’s transfer and I entered a new school which I had faced a very terrible experience. Teachers in that school always beat the children for nothing. They won’t encourage the students at all. They used to assign very low marks thinking that students will work hard even more to get good marks. My performance went down and I faced lot of problems including lacking self confidence,thoughts of suicidal attempts etc…After I changed my school back to the same school where I studied before(again because of my father’s transfer), I again got very good marks and I was finally relieved from that horrible school.
Thus,I conclude that every student’s life lies within the teacher’s hand. And depends how the teachers treat the students well.
can anyone evaluate my essay please?
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In my opinion,school teachers perform a major part for every student in each of their lives. They will shape each and every student in studies when viewed on THE academic side. And it is the duty of every teacher to lead students in a good path in life. So,in my view a good teacher should DISPLAY the following qualities.
1. BE kind,and affectionate
2.SHOW care and attention to every student
3.should advise students to lead a safe and good path
4.should be smart enough to handle each and every student’s performance in academic activity
5.should encourage students to take part in extra curricular activities apart from studies
6.should be more than a parent in school
7.should come down to the level of studentS to understand the student perfectly
8.Should know how to handle the student GENTLY without beating or imposing severe punishments
The above points highlight the qualities of a good teacher but nowadays teachers are not taking proper care OF theIR students and they are not even fulfilling one of the above qualities in some schools. As a result students are FOLLOWING a very dangerous path sometimes.
To illustrate the above points,I experienced dealing with teachers who had both negative and positive qualities,teacherS with merely positive qualities and teacherS with merely negative qualities
I studied in south India and my school days went well till my fifth grade class. Till that time,my studies were going smoothly and I met one excellent teacher with extensively good qualities(the qualities I mentioned above) and she used to advise students in every step of their life, even when they gOt a fail mark in exams. As a result,many of the studentS’ performance drastically changed and resulted in a very good performance IN the FOLLOWING exam sections. This impressed me a lot and I used to clarify my doubts with that teacher always. After I changed my school because of my father’s transfer and I entered a new school WHERE I faced a very terrible experience. Teachers in that school always beat the children for nothing. They DID NOT encourage the students at all. They used to assign very low marks thinking that students WOULD work hard even more to get good marks. My performance went down and I faced lot of problems including lacking self confidence,thoughts of suicidE AfterWARDS I changed my school back to the same school where I studied before(again because of my father’s transfer), I again got very good marks and I was finally FREE OF that horrible school.
Thus,I conclude that every student’s life lies within the teacher’s handS. And depends WHETHER the teachers treat the students well.
Many people say that the internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree or disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I agree with the above statement that internet is the most important invention ever.Because due to the invention of internet,people are experiencing more advantages than before it’s invention. We are having so many facilities while having internet connection at houses. And even at separate internet centres it is more advantageous.
1. We can directly mail to a person and within seconds the mail will be delivered without any delay.
2. The communication point of view is facilitated by using internet.i.e., very easily we can chat with another known person or relative through online chat
3.Many useful information can be browsed and notes can be taken through internet
4.We can definitely improve our knowledge through internet by means of online libraries by visiting their respective websites.
5.Though there are fake websites which will lead us to a wrong path,we can lock or adjust the levels of security in the computers so that no one can try to see the fake websites.
6.We can send important documents through mail or even online by using the internet which will be very useful for the business people or the software people
7. Web meeting can be conducted among working professionals to discuss about important business information
8.More important,by using internet many internet jobs has been landed nowadays which will help us to perform our job through online,the most convenient one
9. Online courses are present in the universities from which we can attend online classes in case of emergencies
10. Ofcourse this will be of little importance,many of us are interested in hearing songs from the websites while doing jobs.this can be done by using internet
From the overall view,using internet will be of utmost importance for all the busy people and even for home makers.
For example,I did online jobs for about one year that gave me confidence to meet people through online and interviewing them through the internet. And it was very useful to me even in the case of studying online courses. I learnt a lot and gained knowledge through online studies being at home. And I got selected in a software company and I performed there very well. So through internet we can learn lot of knowledgeable things that helps us to strengthen our career,to improve our self confidence overall.
Thus I can conclude that using internet, we can gain knowing lot of good informations,improve our knowledge and strengthen our career.
can anyone evaluate my eassay?thanks
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I agree with the above statement that THE internet is the most important invention ever.Because due to the invention of THE internet,people are experiencing more advantages than before ITS invention. We are having so many facilities while having AN internet connection at HOME. And even at separate internet centres it is more advantageous.
1. We can directly mail to a person and within seconds the mail will be delivered without any delay.
2. The communication point of view is facilitated by using THE internet.i.e., very easily we can chat with another known person or relative through online chat
3.MUCH useful information can be browsed and notes can be taken through THE internet
4.We can definitely improve our knowledge through THE internet by means of online libraries by visiting their respective websites.
5.Though there are fake websites which will lead us to a wrong path,we can lock or adjust the levels of security in the computers so that no one can try to see the fake websites.
6.We can send important documents through mail or even online by using the internet which will be very useful for business people or software people
7. A Web meeting can be conducted among working professionals to discuss about important business information
8.More importantLY,by using THE internet many internet jobs has been landed nowadays which will help us to perform our job online,the most convenient one
9. Online courses are present in the universities from which we can attend online classes in case of emergencies
10. Of course this will be of little importance TO many of us WHO are interested in hearing songs from the websites while doing jobs.This can be done by using THE internet
From the overall view,using THE internet will be of utmost importance for all the busy people and even for home makers.
For example,I did online jobs for about one year that gave me confidence to meet people online and interviewing them through the internet. And it was very useful to me even in the case of studying online courses. I learnt a lot and gained knowledge through online studies being at home. And I got selected BY a software company and I performed there very well. So through THE internet we can learn A lot of knowledgethat helps us to strengthen our career,to improve our self confidence overall.
Thus I can conclude that using THE internet, we can gain A lot of good information, improve our knowledge and strengthen our career.
You have enough money to purchase a house or business. Which would you prefer to buy?
In my view, both are important purchasing a house or business. If I have money to choose one thing between house and business then I will go through my present situation. At present, I have job now so I would prefer to purchase a house. But unfortunately, if I have no job then I will prefer to purchase a business. Now I have a good job and I am satisfied with it. In this situation I will prefer to purchase a house. There are many reasons behind this.
Purchasing a house is a good investment according to me. I think day by day every where in the world property rates are increasing. Therefore, for making money I will choose to purchase a house. But if I start a business then there are chances to failure.
Purchasing a house gives happiness to all family members. When people come back from work they want to get good feelings. Good feelings come if people feel relaxed in life. I want a relaxed and peaceful life therefore I will forcefully want to purchase a house and not business. Business gives tensions most of the time.
Purchasing a house also gives confidence. According to me, a person who owns a house will feel more confident as compared to who doesn’t. This is because an investment in a house cannot fail. But people who purchase a business always have a fear of long term success.
Sometimes house also gives bread for people, who don’t have money and job but have a house. This is possible if people own a house. With the help of rent people can eat. I have seen many families who depend on house rent. Business gives bread, only when it is in profit otherwise not.
Finally, I would like to say house is the need for living a happy and peaceful life therefore, I would prefer to purchase a house.
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In my view, both are important purchasing a house or business. If I have money to choose one thing between house and business then I will go through my present situation. At present, I haD A job now so I would prefer to purchase a house. But unfortunately, if I have no job then I will prefer to purchase a business. Now I have a good job and I am satisfied with it. In this situation I will prefer to purchase a house. There are many reasons behind this.
Purchasing a house is a good investment IN MY OPINION. I think day by day every where in the world property rates are increasing. Therefore, for making money I will choose to purchase a house. But if I start a business then there are chances OF failure.
Purchasing a house gives happiness to all family members. When people come back from work they want to get good feelings. Good feelings come if people feel relaxed in life. I want a relaxed and peaceful life therefore I will DEFINITELY want to purchase a house and not A business. Business BRINGS tensions most of the time.
Purchasing a house also gives confidence. IN MY OPINION a person who owns a house will feel more confident as compared to SOMEONE who doesn’t. This is because an investment in a house cannot fail. But people who purchase a business always have a fear of long term success??? FAILURE??.
Sometimes A house also gives bread for people, who don’t have ANY money OR A job but have a house. This is possible if people own a house. With the help of rent people can eat. I have seen many families who depend on house rent. Business gives bread, only when it is in profit otherwise not.
Finally, I would like to say A house is NECESSARY for living a happy and peaceful life therefore, I would prefer to purchase a house.